One wish

by Noelle k.   Apr 18, 2005




PLEASE vote and comment. thanx

She wonders why shes gods mistake.

all the lies she cannot take.

she is gods mistake and living it everyday.

gods 2 hands must have had a hard day he molded this child as nothing but a disgrace.

every time she picks herself up shes thrown back on the ground.

the fake smile worn on her face the tears glisten in her eyes as you laugh in her face.

if god loves us so much how come he wont let this little girl just die?

all she wants is just one wish to be granted...

a wish that seems will never happen..........

she takes out the knife and holds it to her chest...

tonight her wish will finally be granted.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bri

    :'( SOOO SAD

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenn

    your a wonderful writer you have the ability to make people think or wonder
    about the poem kind of like a after tast not a bad one just one that makes then think... i love 5/5
    xoxox jennifer

  • 18 years ago

    by simply taylor

    OMG!! that was really good! "You'll think of me" is by keith urban if you wanted to know. I love his songs! i really loved your poem!!! (how do u do it!!)

  • 18 years ago

    by Btw Raising Hell And Amazing Grace

    wow chick

    i liked your poem and i dont agree about what you said i dont write better then you your peoms are your own personal feelings so yours are as good as mine

    sugar

  • 18 years ago

    by SHYSTY23KO

    :O So sad! But great! Very well written! I like it alot and i'm not just saying that! Definatly a 5! Love it Love it Love it!

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