Can you say WoW. I want to meet a guy like your girl. Great poem

Great poem, keep up the good work. Deffinatly 5/5.
Jen x

Amazing, It rythmed in a decent way:) flowed well and the words were beautiful and i don't see one little fault...

i loved how you put forward the emotions and it really would make someone without them to want them, good job
trevor--

Awww, this is so sweet. Great job.

Beautiful poem!! I love it!! 5/5

Simply beautiful:) I just loved it:)

nice! that is sooooooooooooooooo sweet! :)

great poem! i love the ending. propz

That was good shit man. Keep it up man.

P.S. You should check some of mine out. I think you'll like them.

WOW* i REALLY REALLY LiKED YOUR POEM. i WOULD LOVE TO GET A POEM WRiTTEN ABOUT ME LiKE THAT FROM A GUY. GOOD JOB.

great write....so much emotion. If this is a true story about your girl, then never let her go. Cherish the love you two share.....for one day it will be gone.

SWEET poem=) -hOlly

awwww thiz poems so sweet it seems to mi u guyz r both lucky 2 have eachother well keep up tha gud work definetly a 5/5

I am her oyster
She is my pearl
^^^^^^^^^^
thats my favourite line. its so cute and sweet. i like your endings.
~Freak~

Absolutely beautiful! It flowed perfectly your love was expressed so well. You definitely did an amazing job. ~Brooke~

this is such a beautiful poem! great message behind it! great job! 5/5

AWW! I think that is so so so cute! Whoever she is, I hope she knows how lucky she is to have aguy who expresses himself so beautifully!

nice fluid poem...clear and concise...nice:D

sweet poem....so beautiful...hehe..keep it up! :D