It's Over

by Chelsea   Apr 18, 2005


I'm losing hope of a new day
Everything always slips away
Farther and farther away
The love and the faith are falling away

I need to know you're with me
And not so far away
Come closer and feel my pain
Look into my eyes and say its not the end
I want to know you're with me
It's over

*Definitely not my best but I just wanna know what you think : )
Thanks
And yes I have realized that I do use the word away about 100 times in this but it is an old one and I don't want to change my old work at the moment

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  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Chelsea, my dear, how did you get confused? -- I've tooken over the mind of someone who can see all that is going to happen & I can see these lil children dying so I tell them to "hush" so mommy/daddy doesn't hear them and they ignore my pleads and in return die. Very simple. but thank you for the comment anyhow.

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    As for your poem, it would of been better if you wouldn't of used "away" so much, try mixing it up but not a bad attempt. I've seen WAY worse.

    Love
    Heather

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