Got to give Tough love

by Morning   Apr 18, 2005


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I see you walking by with that smile on your face
And I know its fake because I’ve been in your place
I know you think about taking that knife
And I know taking it to end your life

Your not just one of those girls who’s going through a faze
Your one who’s lost in this depression of a cloudy haze
You crawl into this shelter that you’ve made
As your life crumbles around you and decades

I know you lie with every word you speak
You act like your strong but you know your weak
Stop hiding from the truth we all well know
Listen to me, remember I’m your friend not a foe

I can see every pain you have, I see it in the way you act
Everything I have to say is not just opinion, it’s a fact
Clear as the black ink letters typed on this page,
that’s how well you hide your hate and rage

I know its hard for you try to get through the days
But stop feeling sorry for yourself in all these ways
I know and I see, are not words you want to hear
Everybody says them because for you they fear

But you have to pay me mind, you have to listen
Because simply this is the only option given
You have to stop right here and now
Because you have two strikes and now one foul

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  • 19 years ago

    by Morning

    Thankz you guys! xoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    Wow, great write. Loved this poem Stay strong! >3jess

  • 19 years ago

    by foreverISgone

    wow that poem really opened up my eyes great job

  • 19 years ago

    by Morning

    thankz alot for your comment!

  • 19 years ago

    by *Friends Are Stars*

    good poem. the use of rhyme makes it really effective. im always here if you want to talk xxxxxx