Lost

by girlii797   Apr 19, 2005


Lost without you.
I have no idea how
To react.
What am I to say?
What am I to do?
How can I bare to
Live without you?
You are the greatest
Thing that has ever
Happened to me.
So why can you see,
All of the things that
Are troubling me.
I love you like a sister,
(Although, better than
my blood sister).
Everything you do is
Tearing me up inside.
How can you not see,
All these things that you do
are hurting me?
I look at you and love you.
But when you do these
Things I get mad.
How come you can’t see
That these things are hurting
You too!
I’m just scared for you.
Please don’t condemn
These things I do.
I am only doing these
Things for you.
Without you, I’m lost so
Please just listen and
Try to see that we both
Are lost without the
Love of our best friend
(if you still consider me one).

*THis sucks, i didn't really think about structure or anything, i just wrote, straight from my heart. Don't judge to harshly please! Thanks and please vote/comment*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tinkerbelle

    i agree.it doesn't suck.it's a pretty good poem.better than all of mine.
    5/5
    Tes

  • 18 years ago

    by girlii797

    THank you...lol

  • 18 years ago

    by girlii797

    thanks

  • 18 years ago

    by Diego Moreno

    hey... great poem... i really like it... great job on this one... lates.....

  • 19 years ago

    by girlii797

    your welcome.