Look at me

by IWroteYouAPoemOnMyWrist   Apr 21, 2005


When you look at me
cant you see my disguise?
my fake smile
and the marks that i hide

when you look at me
can you see everything beneath my eyes
the temptation of my knife
and all the times Ive cried

when you look at me
you cant see those things
all of them i hide
and all the Paine that they bring

when you look at me
do you judge me right away
saying I'm a ska.nk
and could you See i cut everyday

when you look at me
do you wonder if theres anything wrong
do you think I'm perfect
and always am Strong

when you look at me
is all you see
a girl hidden behind make up
is that all you can believe

when you look at me
do you see I'm dead inside
and all the pain and sadness
i already have hide

when you look at me
do you ever notice
my hearts broken
and really inside I'm full of loneliness

when you look at me
you cant see those things
my hearts what tells
everything i think

when you look at me
can you tell
I'm a helpless girl
who isn't doing well

when you look at me
do you think you can help
all that has happened
and wheat i do to my self

when you look at me
do you just see a girls face
and not knowing that fake happiness
is all it takes

when you look at me
can you see my mark
the ones i have made
from a broken heart

when you look at me
you cant see those things
and all i am here for
is hiding everything.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    Awesome poem, i can relate to it alot, I gave it a 5/5 keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by CynicxSincexBirth

    yay! once again a very nicely written poem. 5

  • 18 years ago

    by lauren

    yea i know how you feel....everyone around me thinks im so happy when im not and they cant see that...good poem:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Alissa

    your poems are seriously the best I can realate to you with all this I used to be anorexic and unfortnely im a cutter but omg your poems are fantastic love em all!!! Wish I could give ya 10!

  • 19 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    *claps*...wow.....i can relate.....this was amazing...keep it up....i havent talked to you in ages and i feel terrible, im so sorry =(....hope youre doing ok...love you lots and lots lol *big hug*

    -brittnay- ((5/5))

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