Not Just Ignore

by Jessica   Apr 22, 2005


My younger brother wrote this for a good friend of his and he wanted me to post it and see what people thought, so please vote and/or comment! Thanks! :)

What can I say,
What can I do,
To make you feel,
The way I feel for you.

Your smile's so right,
Your laughter so great,
When I look at you,
You should hear my heart race.

When I look at you,
Time passes by,
Cuz when I look into your eyes,
I see a..................

Beautiful girl,
With some beautiful curls,
Beautiful girl,
That spins my world.

How can I change,
When you walk through that door,
To make you see,
And not just ignore.

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Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    I loved it:) Great work!

  • 19 years ago

    by XxIntuitiveAdvicexX

    i rated it a 5

  • 19 years ago

    by XxIntuitiveAdvicexX

    tell ur brother i said he is a good poet

  • 19 years ago

    by PuRpLeHaYz

    oh dats so cute! 5/5
    thanks 4 commenting and voting 4 my poem apprieciate it heaps!
    xx hayz xx

  • 19 years ago

    by christina

    hey thats a grt poem .... tell ur bro its excellent .... i gave it a>> 5

    and girl thanx for votin on mine and thank god it wasnt true :D
    always smile:)
    peaceeeee