The Pro's And Con's Part 2

by Lecrissa   Apr 23, 2005


The Negative Side

I can't help but to think
This world is on the brink

You've got loss and devastation
Through out the lands

People screaming out in frustration
Trying to do what they can

Mother nature has thrown a few curves
Earthquakes and tsunamis
Tornadoes and floods

The drug dealers out there
Really have some nerves

There are nine year olds having babes
And babes ending up in garbage cans

In the middle east theres
Still fighting for the promised land

There are ten year olds using computers
To steal you blind

In our schools
we got children killing other children
then committing suicide

What are we going to do

Any suggestions to make this flow better would help.

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  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    and this is what life is *sigh* so sad....brilliant poem. Peace! //ari\\

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    this seems to be lacking quite a bit in comparision to part 1. and the emotions are disconnected
    ~Freak~

  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    The pace of this was abit off so I gave it a four. But the message was clear and well conveyed good job. I like that you can see both sides of the coin if you ever need subjec6ts I got a game we could p-lay. email e and I will tell you about it. Trust me it will be challenging!!! Take care ...

  • 19 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    Cool thanks tryed 6 ways to spell it and failed

  • 19 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    Nada thanks I changed the line a bit