Deaths door

by Freakfall   Apr 24, 2005


I can't take this pain anymore,
I'm knocking on deaths door.
I'm giving up the fight,
I'm going to fall from a great hight.
I'm killing myself,
getting no help.
ending it all,
instead of standing tall.
as i take the leap,
i fall in a heap,
I'm going to sleep......FOREVER!!!

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  • 17 years ago

    by HidingThePainInMe

    Hey, i loved your poem. youre a great writer, and if thats really how youre feeling i know where youre coming from. last year i almost died, but i have another chance. stay strong - i can relate to what youre saying, and if you want to talk (or anyone else)

    mmsaint666@hotmail.com
    Megan

  • 17 years ago

    by fakegreeneyes

    I feel the same way....its my favorite one..

  • 18 years ago

    by Meg Wilson

    I kno how you feel....My so-called "friends" arent really my friends..n im depressed...i cut myself..my 'parents' saw the scars..then they disowned me..it was the best thing to happen to me....youll get thro it...
    XMxExGX

  • 18 years ago

    by facedownindirt

    w0w... this is another great poem... i no EXACTALLY how u feel... i wish sometimes that i would just die too but i really hope u dont accually kill your self... 5/5 i loved it!

  • 18 years ago

    by fred

    again mad poem
    ur so talented
    from xox fred xox

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