Ocean of Tears

by Frankie   Apr 25, 2005


Tears, pools, lakes,
Oceans of tears
I'm drowning in them
Will they ever stop?
My heart aches
With every fallen tear
Yes,
Drowning in an ocean of tears.

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  • 20 years ago

    by ~ღ~ jeSSica ~ღ~

    simple & short! very creative! i like it-like it! 25/5 =)

  • 20 years ago

    by ~*Monkey See~*~Monkey Do*~

    I really like this poem. Short, but very powerful. I know the feeling 5/5

  • 20 years ago

    by Ellie

    Short, painful... Yet still lovely.

  • 20 years ago

    by Shy

    short but wonderful

  • 20 years ago

    by Misstress

    I honestly like the way you used 'Ocean of Tears' in your poem...
    Fits well with idea of the poem.
    Good job!
    ;-)

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