Last Day

by Chelsea   Apr 25, 2005


I feel the winds pick up
As I look back at my past
I know this isn't my first day
I hope it's not my last
I feel the warmth upon me
Slowly drain away
I hope that you are listening
This might be my last day
I feel the love, I feel the hope
I feel the unwanted fear
I hear the sickening sorrow
I feel the warm wet tears
So I hope you're listening now
This could be my last try
This could be my last day you know
As my mouth gets very dry

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robin Dan Persie

    I like your poem i think it can reaaly make people cry if their soppy and all that if u want email me at

    FILTHYBOYME@MSN.COM

  • 18 years ago

    by vanna

    i like it a lot! keep writing! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ?

    Good poem, I think it would make good song lyrics although maybe the last line could do with abit of work. Keep it up xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Luke

    i loved it. i think its weakest point is the end tho. if you could fix that up itd be super-awesome. 5/5.

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