I think this one is better than the last. Nice work..I got a new one out call This sex must be a sin..I think you'd like it. Check it out if ya want. >3jess

i loved thic pom, u are very good at this ,please hurry with part 3

wow!!!that was ,wow!!!

omg this is like the sexiest poem on here i mean DAMN you gots skill lol keep it up. im young but im very adult for my age and thats how i know that this is just damn good

i cant wait for part 3!!! hurry up and write it!! pleaseeeeee!!!!! :)
xoxoxoxoxoxo samara

Matthew, it was like you were right there when I do that to my beau! Awesome. Will there be a part three? Comment on some more of mine(5 times). Love it! 5/5!

unreal!!! oh wow i totally love it and im so pumped 4 part 3!!! please post it soon!! you've got such a talent. thankyou so much for your comment on my poem! im going to check out some of your others.
love cim xoxo

Damn I can't even imagine the next one! This was great!! This one had a little humor to it as well! You can write some steamy poems! Keep posting looking forward to part 3! Take Care! Brooke

lol i like it, alot, thnx for commenting on my poem ;) i bet part 3 will be even better, i like your style, keep writing! xx

liked the ending :p good way of involving the reader

your really good..wow..keep it up.5/5

Shannon<33

holy.****..that was like porno n a poem in one...thats the bomb right there..keep on keepin..and do part 3,4,5 and more!!..lol

DAMMIT BOI!! YOU CAN REALLY GET SOMEBODY.... I WISH I KNEW YOU..... THAT WAS REALLY GOOD KEEP RIGHTIN.
*plz comment on mine*

that wasy tight at the end you are a very good writter you should keep up the good work really you should

wow, that was great. very hot lol.

Jemma

my god matthew!!!lol.....*inhales*u def. know how to get a girl all horned up lol........oh man......as for the poem great rhyme scheme....lol....god i can almost taste everything lol....j/k..........
~*~yasmin~*~

Awesome poem! Once again, very hot~Holly

omg that was soooo good i loved it ....just like part one...you really now what i like;) great job cant wait to read more !!!!!!!! your on my favs list for sure!

JennahLacey

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i agree with txma09. i like the ending as well as the whole poem. keep it up!

:-)