Comments : I wish I could go Back In Time

  • 17 years ago

    by Anna

    I also wish I could go back in time, and fix all the things I regret, but just like I think you said I'd live it again. hope you're ok. great poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Kia

    that's a really good poem the only thing i would have changed is in the first stanza here

    But it didn’t last a long time
    It didn’t really last

    --- i would put
    -------It wasn't that long ago
    But it didnt really last

    just a suggestion.... dont mean anything by it... i love the poem great job

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    i like the repitition of i want to turn back time. nice touch.
    ~Freak~

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    i really like the repitition. gud job.
    ~Freak~

  • 17 years ago

    by Richard

    wow tahts all i have 2 say very well done

  • I Wish I Could 2! Great Job Once Again! 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Robert

    well done!

  • 17 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Good poem but it never really stood out for me....It flowed well and i can relate but yet it was missing something...Can't put my finger on what but it was still good

  • 17 years ago

    by Nici

    A poem topic that I think the majority of people can relate to, except for those perfect few lol

    Seriously though, this piece made me think about my own past and the words seemed to fit well.

    Keep Writing
    Nici

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Wow. That was good. I totally agree with how you feel and I can definately relate...The word flow was very good. Overall it was excellent. 5/5. What it deserves

  • 17 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    awesome poem! loved it!! 5/5 definately! i feel the same way!

  • 17 years ago

    by Lyla

    That was a great poem. I really like your sad poems

  • 17 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    With your poems I can always feel what you felt while you were writing it, it's quite a talent.

  • 17 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    this is good, i relate a lot. good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Rolo

    I believe that we all would like to go back in time for one reason or another. You captured the feeling of this impossible journey. Nice job.

  • 17 years ago

    by jencam

    i really like this one

  • 17 years ago

    by Synyster

    this would make a good song

  • 17 years ago

    by abcede

    the line "I wish I could go back in time" adds such a great effect! the flow is not AS good as the other ones, but the message you bring across is SOO SOOOOO true!! great idea! very creative!!
    peace,
    Abcede:P

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    i can really relate! nice poem

  • 17 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Great...the repetition brings the poem together nicely. I'm seeing some reoccuring thoughts in your poetry...all very good.

    xxx