I also wish I could go back in time, and fix all the things I regret, but just like I think you said I'd live it again. hope you're ok. great poem

that's a really good poem the only thing i would have changed is in the first stanza here

But it didn’t last a long time
It didn’t really last

--- i would put
-------It wasn't that long ago
But it didnt really last

just a suggestion.... dont mean anything by it... i love the poem great job

i like the repitition of i want to turn back time. nice touch.
~Freak~

i really like the repitition. gud job.
~Freak~

wow tahts all i have 2 say very well done

I Wish I Could 2! Great Job Once Again! 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

well done!

Good poem but it never really stood out for me....It flowed well and i can relate but yet it was missing something...Can't put my finger on what but it was still good

A poem topic that I think the majority of people can relate to, except for those perfect few lol

Seriously though, this piece made me think about my own past and the words seemed to fit well.

Keep Writing
Nici

Wow. That was good. I totally agree with how you feel and I can definately relate...The word flow was very good. Overall it was excellent. 5/5. What it deserves

awesome poem! loved it!! 5/5 definately! i feel the same way!

That was a great poem. I really like your sad poems

With your poems I can always feel what you felt while you were writing it, it's quite a talent.

this is good, i relate a lot. good job!

I believe that we all would like to go back in time for one reason or another. You captured the feeling of this impossible journey. Nice job.

i really like this one

this would make a good song

the line "I wish I could go back in time" adds such a great effect! the flow is not AS good as the other ones, but the message you bring across is SOO SOOOOO true!! great idea! very creative!!
peace,
Abcede:P

i can really relate! nice poem

Great...the repetition brings the poem together nicely. I'm seeing some reoccuring thoughts in your poetry...all very good.

xxx