What is

by Amanda   Apr 27, 2005


What is a mum,
to me and you,
She is someone,
that I once knew,

A mum to me,
is pain and fear,
who has left me,
and is never here,

A mum to you,
is someone nice,
who always listens,
and gives advice,

I don't need a mum,
or not even a dad,
I've got my new one,
and i am so glad.

Copyright 2005 - Amanda Linzi

Short i know but i wrote it when i was thinking of my mum last October. Please comment, Thanks :)

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  • 19 years ago

    by Courtney Lynn

    Pretty good.. Your a good poet

  • 19 years ago

    by Courtney Lynn

    Pretty good.. Your a good poet

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Sorry that you have to feel like this....My mom never treated me very well, so I kinda relate!!! A very good poem, very touching!!!

    *Love Sabrina*

  • 19 years ago

    by *Friends Are Stars*

    aww this is cute, i can relate xxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by *Friends Are Stars*

    aww this is cuter, i can relate xxxxx