I moved it from rape stories because someone thought it would be funny to mess up my rating. Please read, vote, and comment seriously.

Thank you

Wow this was soo good... 5/5. Keep it up it was really interesting. Peace and love Mia Xxx

i knew someone would that up. its not so mush a conversation between the two people, as two different views on what happened. He was drunk and thought they were just having rough sex, while she was sober and saying it's rape. It will make more sese if you go back and read only the guy part and then only the girl part.

I hope that makes sense!

I knew soneone would bring that up. Its not so much*

make more sense*

Sorry about that ;)

Excellent write, Matthew.

5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

Nidhi's Amit.

haha i really liked this poem..very very good..5/5! keep it up

Shannon<33

Wow that was really good, clever way to write a poem, and it flowed really well! Keep it up!! xxx

VERY nice poem! (And I usually don't like poem with curse words.) This poem was so funny and yet so sad at the same time. I was laughing in the beginning but then as it keeps going you can tell everything is getting more and more serious and you feel so sorry for the poor girl. I especially liked the part about how she trusted him with her heart and it made her so sad but how he will burn in hell which makes her glad. Priceless. Very good!!! Keep it up:)

excellent poem. i could put myself in her place. awesome job. your a great writer. check out mine someday if ya have the time. thanks!!:)

hey dis is usch a gewd poem it makes alotta sense 2 me lol gewd job realli enjoyed readin it :)
TaKe CaRe

hey there, great poem man! I like how you interpreted the good/bad. Keep on writin!

Take Care, Jess x

awesome poem!!

Wow........reallly......good!!!!.........lol.....5/5

UNBELIEVABLE!!!! It totally kicked ass

yo that shit was intense... i almost wanted to cry. u got skills boi keep it up!!!

Very good poem there, you showed both points of view really well, Incredibly written poem there, well done... really powerful and it really shows rape very well...

Wow not what I was expecting for part 3! But written so well with the different views from the guy and the girl! It was interesting to read. Keep it up! Take Care! Brooke 5/5

damn that was some scary shit!

but its ALL good

PeaCe!

oh man, at first i was just like okay a simple boy/girl thought but whoa that did change 5/5

omg... your a very good poet.. i cant imagine how you came up with this stuff but keep doing wat your doing hun!