Sanctuary

by jarrod   Apr 28, 2005


The last to fall
evils final gate
an invisible wall
where some come late

no need for fear
no peril will show
no enemy too near
no face of foe

yet here i lay
cowering in death
and this i pray
it wasn't those, i loved best!

sometimes your sanctuary can be your enemy
and thats when it hurts the most!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Good poem. It had a nice flow to it. It waas well done. Keep up the good work.
    --Sarah--

  • 18 years ago

    by R F

    Hey Jarrod!

    I loved the Title ,its really unique and attractive! and lead me to the end to read about this poem! well i always believe that our Sanctury is our enemy!
    coz this place always drags us back to em!!! so its surely an enemy! Right?

    OK,nice poem,nice idea,i love
    this simple deep style : ) CooL (5/5)

    Peace
    Rua Francis.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lindsay C

    Really really good Jarrod!! I loved it! Keep it up!! 5/5

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