Seeing Feelings on a Computer Screen

by Nobrainy_duh   Apr 29, 2005


Colors and hues rotate from an epicenter,
I feel myself taken by it,
Sitting in a chair in front of the computer screen,
My mind leaves my body behind,

I am thrown into a world of torrid emotions,
As the colors change, they finish out the spectrum,
Patterns matching the music played and the feelings unseen,
Then they begin with a new design.

On and on it goes,
I long to leap in and float,
Among the electrical currents,
And graceful waves,

I see myself inside the domain,
My body floating and twisting
Being strewn about my unseen forces,
But the vision is still welcomed because,
That is what I feel, but do not express.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lipton

    This was great! I loved your language in this one. It just makes the whole poem seem to come alive... Great work!

    ~Ciao Lipton

  • 18 years ago

    by Sparklylipgloss

    thats interesting with a capital I....but liked it a lot...<3! please check mine out!! im new.

    Liz

  • 18 years ago

    by Anne Conner

    That was very cool. I really like your poetry, keep writing.
    ~anne~

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Very original and unique! I love the lines
    I see myself inside the domain,
    My body floating and twisting
    Being strewn about my unseen forces,
    But the vision is still welcomed because,
    That is what I feel, but do not express.
    ---very imaginative! 5/5

    Love ღ Always,
    Heather M Craig

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