nice 4/5

It was different but I liked it! I liked the rhyming too! Good work! Take Care! Brooke

Very Very Nice. 5/5 again

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Very good and scary! 5.0 Mayb u cud check out my poemz one day! Thanx ♥

real intresting.....what exactly was it bout? just trying to make sure i got it rite

Intresting in an errie manner a good read too keep it up...

i love your writing you are truly talented. keep writing.
~Freak~

i love your writing you are truly talented. keep writing.
~Freak~

Wow..Deep..

What is it about?

makes you ponder...=)

It flows well, at least mostly, and has a good rhyming scheme...

Every poem I've read of you has the same form, with the same rhyming scheme and the same amount of stanzas...

Perhaps try something different? You seem to be a good writer, so I think you can do it.

I like how your poems are short, yet deep...makes them much more interesting for me to read!

Flawless flow. Very deep and expressive...I loved it!

well written dark poem

Nice job thats diffrent and i liek diffrent your amazing keep up the lovely work 5.5