Crimson Skies

by Victoria   May 3, 2005


A Flower bed
That is now dead
The Garden of Eden bloomed everyday
But has chocked on poison and gone away
A peaceful place it used to be
Heaven and hell have gone to war its time to flee
The angels choke on their halos of gold
The demons from hell grow evermore bold
A pact was made that no demon or angel could set foot on the earths ground
This pact was broken and the promise cannot be re-bound
So swords of fire clash with swords of pure light
The day gives way to hells eternal night
Crimson skies can be seen from down below
Humans have no idea of the war that grows
Their fates hang in the balance that was once kept
A balance maintained by rogue slayers while they slept
Now the world could fall apart
The beginning of the end has finally begun to start

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  • 18 years ago

    by Forever29

    Imaginative & well thought out. An excellent write. 5

  • 18 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    OoOo I like it. Defidently dark. Nice write. >3jess

  • 19 years ago

    by lindzy

    Good poem! 5/5, i like it alote, keep up the good work!
    ~*lindz*~

  • 19 years ago

    by Nicholle

    That's very original. I like it!

  • 19 years ago

    by Miss Kay

    Amazing. Simply that.

    I loved this. It's seriously really good and everything just went together so well.

    I dont get amazed by many poems, so go ahead and feel special. Definate 5/5

    --Kayla