Can you Help Me?

by The Flame Within   May 6, 2005


Why is my skin so soft, so easily torn, so simple to tear, not hard at all to damage it

why is this knife so sharp, so strong, so cold, and able to do hurt

does it really hurt, does it really help. will it make me feel good, will it help me to go on

why is it that my wrist carries many of the biggest veins, with so many that can easily be sliced with a simple pull

is there an answer why the knife has to be so sharp, so sharp that it can tear through skin and beyond, and pierce the veins

i want to know why my veins are so weak, why my skin can only protect so much, why it cant defend against something so strong

i only want to know why this knife that i hold is able to cut my wrist so easily, should i see how sharp it is, should i test this steel, i want to but i know its wrong

please my friends, take this knife away, take this man forged "God" that can take life away, help me, please....help me

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  • 20 years ago

    by girlii797

    Nick, is this true. Please say no! OMG, please say it isn't true, i don't personally know you, but i care. I hope you stay strong.

    I once was like this. It has been about 5 months since I told my parents, i got help...and i don't do that anymore. I'm not saying the thoughts, and pressures aren't there...i just resist them.

    So please if this is true, get help, and resist these pressures!

  • 20 years ago

    by Cait

    That was great. But i hope you didn't cut. shit thats the worst thing in the world that ne1 could do besides suicide. Don't do anything stupid.

  • 20 years ago

    by blood4love

    hey dude idk u but im here 4 u...i have been cutting 2 n it suxs but it helps me...i think!!well hit me back ttyl

    hopey(blood4love)

  • 20 years ago

    by Andrea

    awww nick you know i am always here for you and i love you with all of my heart and would not want anything to happen to you. remember our promise? no cutting...i havent cut so neither should you. we are doing such a wonderful job!! you are very strong and i know together we can do this.

    love always...*hugs*

  • 20 years ago

    by Victoria

    Wow great poem and I really hope that you are ok.

    take care

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