this one is really great! filled with meaning and emotion! keep it up!

omg.. this is so good... yet sad.. im sorry if ur going through rough times but we all have our ups and downs thats life honeii... it sux.... i wish you the best and keep writing..
marlene

wow, thats really good. I can relate. good job.

wow...that's all i can say

~XxUnwantedxX♥

Hey awesome poem!!! I can relate in so many ways. It's a great poem. Check out some of mine if you want to. That was great. 5/5.
Keep it up. xox

Other then this being a feel sorry for me poem what is the true message your conveying her because if thats it I am not impressed...

5/5 i love ur work keep it up n dont let no 1 bring u down EVER MWAHZZZ
xoxox
paulette

Wow, this poem is amazing. It's so emotional, I feel your pain. Good job.
Take care always,
- Shell x

WOW that is my favorite poem so far of yours!!!

So sad but amazing. I like the structure of this poem! Excellent piece. It was full of emotion and feeling. :)

That was a great poem! 5.0 I feel the same way! lol plz return the favor by voting and commenting on 6 of poems! thanx ♥

WOW! I liked this a lot! It was sooo sad too!
Love always.....
Haily
XOXOXOXO

for being invisable you created a wonderful picture of pain ace. hmmm maybe this title should be changed what do you think?...

I Loved The Way You Included Those Colors Inside Your Poem It Was Very Descriptive I ENJOYED My Read!! 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

ANother greaat poem! you're very talented! 5.0 Mayb u cud check out my poemz one day! Thanx ♥

i think u write really good poems

excellent once more! 5/5 makes life seem bitter all over again lol as if it already wasn't.....Peace! //ari\\

i like, 5 :)

good job! keep it up! loved it!

Depressing, sounds kinda like a My Chemical Romance song...