Doorstep

by Dorotea©   May 8, 2005


Searching and craving for somewhere to abide

My fate; at the doorstep to reside

Aching for serenity which is denied

Doorstep; peace and seeking to divide

Between the fracture death shall come with no pride

Flicker of hope will die out inside

The clutching will to yearn for peace will subside

No peace did this search to soul provide

Endless striving for destruction to confide

My fate; yearning at the doorstep died

(C) Copyright Sonja von Bell

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  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    I loved the way this poem flowed. Very nice-- Excellent as always:) I think I will add you to my favorites:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    Okay nobody seems to understand this poem. It has to do with leaving behind everything...and yet never getting to the place you were searching for. You find the doorstep yet you must stay there.

  • 18 years ago

    by steve

    Very sad, and awesome rhyming.....how did you think of that many "ide" sounding words??? I like it

  • 18 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    alec,
    thanks for telling me what u really think. well you see this poem is definitly not that good, but i wrote it to portray my life...and i know it might be dull for someone who doesn't know me..but i was hoping people would understand it in their own way. thanks for reading and commenting,
    satuxxa

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