Close the door

by deadnalone   May 8, 2005


Drain the blood from this frozen heart,
I don't need it anymore,

Watch me as i fall apart,
And then just close the door,

Close the door on this broken mask,
Revealing my emotion for all to see,

Close the door on this little girl,
Longing to be free,

Close the door and forget just what,
Just what you did see,

Close the door right in my face,
It's only little me,

Close the door because i can stand,
On my own two feet,

Close the door cause you think i don't need you,
As i silently weep,

Close the door in haste,
You can't watch me any longer,

Close the door because you think,
If you kick me when I'm down, I'll get stronger,

Close the door in hatred,
And close the door in fear,

Close the door cause you're scared of me,
You don't want me to come near,

Close the door, shut away my hurt,
It is really that easy for you,

If i could close the door on my hurt,
In a second i would, for you,

Close the door on my sorrowful heart,
Cause you don't care that I'm not OK,

Close the door and lock it,
Never let me come out and say,

Say how you close the door on me,
Cause it's me you couldn't stand,

But now i guess I'm closing the door on you,
Cause you will never understand.

-not written with anyone in mind just generalization i think

*All votes and comments greatly appreciated as always*

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  • 18 years ago

    by deadnalone

    thankyou so much

  • 18 years ago

    by Lemma

    No-one will close the door on you if you let them know u need them. And if they do then my door will always be open to you hun.
    Em xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Toni

    Absolutely fantastic!!!! This one is one of your best recent writes. I love the style that you use. Maybe a bit more imagery needed to really grip you, other than that, brilliant. xxxxxx i hope you are ok, and i am still here for you xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by confusion

    repetition in this one worked well. the line

    Close the door cause you think i don't need you,
    As i silently weep,

    didnt flow as well, but not sure how to change it and still keep the same meaning. apart from that fab ell, always here, lucy lu -x-x-x-