Nobody would care

by ElegantlyWasted   May 9, 2005


"I think i need some help,
My strength has gone astray,
Fights and fists have broken me,
And depression is here to stay,

I see the knifes, so innocent,
Just calling for me to slice,
For so long I've resisted,
But now what's the point in life?

If all people do is hurt you,
Then why do i still breathe?
I don't see the positives anymore,
I pray each night, to leave,

Disappear from this horrible life,
And escape my deadly home,
But there is no sign of redemption,
I am destined to be alone!

I'll suffer in his filthy guilt,
For I'm not like i used to be,
Each night I'll wish for this to stop,
Because all i want is to be free,

So forgive me for acting selfish,
I just can't take this pain,
A life without a glimpse of hope,
Has driven me completely insane,

Take one last look at me,
And sigh in utter despair,
Because even after i take my life,
Not a soul will even care ...

Not a soul"
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  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    I'd care. I'm always here, guh! ;) There's always luv sumwhere, please don't leave. PWEEEEEEEEZZZZZZZ!!! I can't even count how many of my poems u've commented on, so I'm gonna comment on a few mo, OK? Keep it up, Shawdy, I am so proud of u. MUCH LUV TAKE CARE OF YOSELF PEACE PEACE PEACE, //aRI\\ akA ~+~ShadowShawdy~+~

  • 18 years ago

    by Robin

    Wow.... first of all thanks for commenting on my poem. This was a really amazing poem. I could really relate. Every feeling was described with the perfect words, and the flow was awesome. I can tell you're gonna be on my favorites list. Hope you're okay,
    XoxoX
    Robin

  • 18 years ago

    by Amba

    Wow that was really good, so good, you have so much talent! and its cool to know your from NZ im from welly!!
    5/5
    xox Bam

  • 18 years ago

    by anissa

    =( That is SO sad! I've had a similar sutuation like that!

  • 18 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    wow, that poem was so powerful. I loved it, thought it went really nice together. Take care. >3jess

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