My materpiece

by LoVeAbLeShOrTie   May 9, 2005


I picked up a knife..
it slipped down touched the ground
came back up and hit my wrist
with a gentle twist blood came
as i sat there and stared
with tears starting to form
the fear of what lay written on my arm......
ur name with blood dripping slowly off of every letter
the masterpiece was finally complete
forever your name will be the one my mind will fear

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  • 18 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    kick ass poem hun I loved it that was written really well The flow was awsome

  • 19 years ago

    by AJ

    hey, good job. short but got the point across. good work. thanks for the comment. 5/5

    ~no more

  • 19 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    Great poem!~ ♥ 5.0

  • 19 years ago

    by **Ashleigh*Sue**

    Ash its ok guys arent worth doing that trust me i should know i cut over a guy. well everything will be ok. keep up the great poems. love ya always
    ***aShLeIgH***

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather

    loved it... im a cutter also... but just stay in strong. im always here if you wanna talk! :o).

    xoxo,
    Heather***

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