The Truth About Heaven

by Unseen Exposure   May 10, 2005



The truth about heaven
It's dark and gray and cold
God takes all his angels
And cages all their souls

The truth about heaven
As sad as it may seem
Is a nightmare in itself
Unlike any hopeful dream

The truth about heaven
And the gate's of admittance
Turn away those with faith
And those with good riddance

The truth about heaven
And the wings of grace
Are believed a lie
It's a deathly place

The truth about heaven
And the place that we see
Is undeniably horrid
With burning scrutiny

The truth about heaven
Is just one big lie
I just thought you should know
What doesn't exist in the sky.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel Ellison

    I believe in the other side (Heaven) and the eternity of the soul. I believe that the other side is home where we all came from and where we will all go again.The truth is, the other side is exquisitely beautiful. Heaven is also a perfect mirror image of earth's natural topography. The other side, where time does not exist, where every living thing always was and always will be, nothing ages, nothing rots, nothing corrodes. Every square inch of land and water is magnificently, eternally new. I have soo much to look forward too and so do you once your home you will realize

  • 18 years ago

    by pinkalias

    I love that you wrote this about a subject that people usually put too much faith in.
    Displaying something horrid about something that people are taught to think is bliss was an original and worthy write.
    I love the betrayl of belief you display in it and the disappointment portrayed in the lines comparing to what one thinks is true.
    I loved these lines,
    "God takes all his angels
    And cages all their souls"

    and I absolutly loved the last two lines,
    "I just thought you should know
    What doesn't exist in the sky."
    Wonderful