NO hunni!!!! DON'T!!!!! U made me stronger so if you can do it 4 me u can do it 4 u! Please?? :(

its not bad at all. 5/5

You said it's bad, it's really not. It may not be your best, but it is still good.

i'll comment on ur poem in my other account so u can read my new poem. it's just that i don't want anyone i know to come across it so i made a new account. :)

This is still my main account - that is just an account i made for any poems that i don't want any of my family or friends (apart from jade) to see. Cos she's the only one who knows about the poem. :)

wow i reli like the last 2 verses can reli relate. xcellent poem, reli it wasnt bad!!!! :) xxxx stay strong and keep writin

Very nicely done Sabrina, please dont give up hon, Im always here if you need someone, no matter what! Dont ever forget that I love you and care about you.
Much Love
-xx-
Broken

I didn't find that this poem stuck out in anyway from the normal "teenage angst" poetry. There were no stunning rhymes, in fact I've heard all of them before. Sometimes writings good to just release emotions and I suppose that that's what this is. Try to broaden your horizons, write about the things around you, not just about yourself. Keep writing.

so sad =( 5/5!!! great work.. thanks for checking out my poems.. take care, hugs

So sad....i know how you feel, and i really hope you can get through this, i know its so hard but i also know it isnt impossible. This was an excellent poem girl xxxx

I have never cut, but I was very close to someone who did. He did it for all the reasons in this poem and it makes me very sad. But great job.

good job, im sry for the pain ur dealin w/, if u ever need ne one 2 talk 2 my email addie is on my profile and u can talk 2 me, once again great poem, keep up the great work!!

thanks for the comment, thats why I love to share some of my poems I love to hear the feedback and read other poems and improve on my own work. I dont mean to sound disrespectful or like a therapist trying to pry in your life but suicide is not the only way to go when your fealing down just go to sleep or listen to some soothing music or call someone close to you. Your to young to throw everything away with 1 thrust of your blade. Give life a chance to unravel itself u will have downs but the ups will be so much better,

-P.S sorry for the rambling but great poem, I somehow know u for just reading that 1 poem, Ill check out more later on.

wow...this poem is amazing...I understand exactly how you feel...Thanks for the comments...it means alot to me

Hey, I really like this poem. I can relate to it. It's how I feel. 5/5

- Thanks for reading my poem -

~ Tina

no it's not bad at all. Why be negative? either you're negative or you'r saying it's bad so people can tell you that it's good.

very good stratagy but not what real writer would do. Authors don't write in their books "i know this is bad" now do they?

No I don't say it, so that people will tell me that it's good....I DO think it's bad, cause I think that I can do it better....But you are right, authors don't write that in their books, but again this is not a book =0)

wow..this poem is great...thanks i am happy that you enjoyed mine...keep writting

Thank you sooo much for commenting on my poem. It means alot really. And I hope that you have enough strength to tell someone. Anyone. It doesn't even matter who. Just as long as you do something. Being a cutter is hard because it puts so much extra burrden on your shoulders...and to be honest I felt humilated when I told...but I felt so much relief that I will never be able to describe. Keep your head up.
Much Love,
Jordan-Paige

deep 1, o n by the way were do u get those kinds of pictures for ur profile.