I'm a waste

Ouch, you okay? I felt the hatred in this, and you ain't a waste!
I liked the flow and the repetion(sp?lol im so thick) of the words 'im a waste' it got the point across but your NOT a waste lol did I get my point across?
The last lines for me are the most important I beleive they pull the whole poem together, but in this I felt they just didn't go "A waste of time
My love isn't even
Worth your time"

Change ' a waste of time' into something so it will end better and still hold the great flow that was through out the poem.
this was written well, like all your freaken poems, stupid person had to be good argh lol im joking its a pleasure to read your poetry :D

kepp it up xx

.......very sad, giving your love away like that......5/5 it's still really good. i've enjoyed reading your poems! Peace....