Comments : A suicide for my family

  • 18 years ago

    by Rebecca Morgan

    This poem was really good. 5/5, keep writing and i will keep reading

  • 18 years ago

    by Calley

    this poem is really deep. when i was reading it, i started to cry. it is really sad. but i loved it.

  • 18 years ago

    by JL

    omg its so sad!! i started to cry 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Me

    sounds like my type of actions

  • 18 years ago

    by Kimeko Lancaster

    THIS IS A REALLY GREAT POEM. IT WAS SO SAD BUT GREAT JOD WELL DONE

  • 18 years ago

    by veronica freeman

    i loved the poem. i can relate to this poem. last night i almost ended my life and my mom walked in and saw me do it. and she sat mee dosn and told me she would kill herself bb/c i am the only reason why she is living.
    i want tto die right now b/c i think she is the only persson who cares. b/c my lover likes somebody else.

  • 18 years ago

    by veronica freeman

    i loved the poem. i can relate to this poem. last night i almost ended my life and my mom walked in and saw me do it. and she sat mee dosn and told me she would kill herself bb/c i am the only reason why she is living.
    i want tto die right now b/c i think she is the only persson who cares. b/c my lover likes somebody else.

    *rate my poems and comment

  • 18 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    Great write hun. I loved it. <3333

  • 18 years ago

    by AJ

    wow, it's awesome. Great job. I love it. Keep it up. Thanks for the comment. 5/5

    ~no more

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    AWSOME, so very toching and emotional, I just love it....Ok I think it's about time to add you to my fave list =0) I relate to this poem sooo much, cause all I can think about is suicide, I try so hard not to, but...hmm...Well done, you have so much talent!!!
    If you ever get the time, could you please comment on Suicide pills and alone..(In that order, cause it's astory), I would really appreciate it and these poems means so much to me.....But only if you don't mind =0)

    *Hugs Sabrina*

  • 18 years ago

    by Mattie

    aww... *tear* its so sad!!!!! i love it

  • 18 years ago

    by XKt_ShellyX

    What an a amazing poem, so devastatingly sad but so beautifully written, really makes me want to cry. such emotion in it.
    i love it.

    suicide isnt the way out
    stay strong
    love katie
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Anna

    wow...top poem,well done it was excelent. check out mine if u have time :). love ya xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by abby

    i know its not real but i feel like that some times

  • 18 years ago

    by RaNdOmGaL

    omg your poem is brilliant, im almost crying!!!! there are sooo many talented writers that i keep finding!!! keep up the good work!!!!
    luv RaNdOmGaL xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    This poem was worth the reading
    and keep it up! i