Daddys little girl

by † Hidden Tears †   May 15, 2005


Daddy you keep coughing
You’re looking really ill
You’re getting all pale
You’re always taking a pill

I hope you’re ok
Maybe you need some rest
You keep going to the doctors
They’re making you have tests

You don’t show your worry
But I know something’s wrong
I can see it in your eyes
You write it in your songs

Mummy’s getting worried
She cried on me last night
I try not to cry too
But all I feel is fright

I’m not sure what’s going on
But I can tell that it’s not good
Your always feelings low
Not looking like you should

I hope your ok
And I no I don’t say this a lot
But I love you
With all that I’ve got

You’re my daddy
And always will be
When we were together
We were always wild and free

I hate seeing you this way
So helpless and hurt
I wish I could do something
To wipe away the dirt

Yet whatever happens don’t forget
I’ll always be your little girl
Though the best and the worst
I’m your little baby pearl.

*Please Comment And Vote It Would Mean So Much To Me..Thanx*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Im In Love What Can I Say

    Wow that is really deep i like this it is amazing i like the last part :
    I hope youre ok
    And i know i dont say this a lot
    But i love you
    With all that i've got.
    I like that line because i once said that to my dad so i know how you feel. great poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Boycrazy

    good job!keep up the good work!I know it is really hard to write poems.I tried before but mine never turn out any good.
    Alicia

  • 18 years ago

    by Sonya

    I REALLY LIKED THAT POEM AND IT REMINDS ME OF MY DAD!

  • 18 years ago

    by Left-Forever-No-More-Trying

    i loved that poem hun, i hope your dads ok, he's a great guy. see you at school hun
    love hannah

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    That is so sad! It made me cry! He'll be in my prayers! 5.0

    xoxo