Torn in two by you

by Freakfall   May 15, 2005


My heart has been broken
it was broken by you
broken by the girl i loved
it was torn in two by you
i will never forgive you
for all the pain you brought
you made my life a mess
you made me so distraught
because of you I've turned to cutting
and now cutting is what i love.

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  • 18 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    This is an excellent poem n i understood it completely.. i feel da same way about a guy n i cut cuz of him too..

  • 18 years ago

    by facedownindirt

    w0w... i felt every word... but i really hope that your ok and that if u really do cut that u stop... u seem like a really kool person and a GREAT writer so if u need someone to talk to e-mail me!

  • 18 years ago

    by fred

    i liked this 1
    keep up ur mad poems
    from xox fred xox

  • 18 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Gr8 poem hun....keep ^ the gr8 work!!!!*HUGGKES*<3 Elizabeth

  • 18 years ago

    by broken angel

    I found this poem to be astonishing, extremely well written. I could feel, taste, touch the emotion. B-E-A-Utiful! I really liked it. 5/5
    Luv always, KT

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