Left Alone

by Red Charm   May 16, 2005


This red rose is fading
The crimson changing to black
The heart of it gave out
When it fell under brutal attack

With you there is no forever
I should have known it
Somehow, You were so clever
And hid it well

I remember every word
How easily I believed
Every lying whisper
Now seems so absurd

I am left alone
The future looms ahead
It’s left unknown
No matter what was said

I know y'all are probably like how do you go from a rose to whatever you call the end. I just started writing, this is what I got. It's sort of a work in progress. ~Rate/Comment please

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  • 18 years ago

    by Unloved ♥

    well its awesome work in progress!!

    Unloved ♥

  • 18 years ago

    by ?

    Loved the lines...
    'This red rose is fading
    The crimson changing to black
    The heart of it gave out
    When it fell under brutal attack'
    Very good indeed, keep it up xxx