Comments : Sustenance

  • 18 years ago

    by Danielle

    Thank you for the comments you left on a couple of my poems a while back. I appreciate it more than you'll ever know.
    Anywho, this was an awesome poem, really deep and emotional. From what I've read, you seem like a great writer. Hope to read more. Keep up the good work...
    Take Care.
    Always, Danielle.

  • 18 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    wow this poem was very good it flowed very well your writing is one of a kind really. thanks for commenting on my poem i appreciate it your an excellent writer
    take care
    HS

  • 18 years ago

    by AJ

    wow, very powerful. I love it. Excellent write. Keep it up. Def a 5. Thank you for the comment. Take care.

    ~no more

  • 18 years ago

    by Shadows Collide

    Brilliantly written. This poem had a lot of feeling and soul within it. Passion is the key to great poems.

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    Powerful poem, all the emotions seemed to swirl on the screen just grabbing me in, I read your comment on my poem even though it has 37 others, thank you very much for it, every comment means a lot to me, well done on this poem I am going to take a look at some more

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    Increidably emotional, It cuts to the core. I'm lost for words that could possibly describe such a read as this, masterful ye painful t know it happens. Stay strong!
    luv kt.

  • 18 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    Wow hun very powerful 5/5 xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    I love this poem! thats all i can say well done. thankyou for the comment, its very sweet of you keep up the great work

    Jenn

  • Huni u dnt deserve ur pain, im so sorry that life is like this for you!! you deserve so much more!! i wish that ther was something i could say to take away your pain but i no from experience that no matter what anyone says it stays ther!! all i can say is PLEASE hang in ther, im sure people love u and i no that i dont want u 2 go!! email me if u need me!! my email is mah_sexc_kisses@hotmail.com
    luv Maddison xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    O so so true...wow...took the words from my mouth. This is really deep and heartbreaking. But whateva thoughts are rammed into your head, you have to know that u dont deserve the worst or nething...
    make ur future babe...
    ill be here by ur side...
    take care of urself luv ya xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Oh hun.. this poem is so sad. I hope that this isn't how you truly feel, but if that be the case then I'm always here to talk to. You're very talented, and I hope you keep on writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Wow Katie this is really good...I liked it alot!!! Very deep...

    ::MELI::

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Gee. this is the poem with so much emotion. gee!!! i have read others but this tops the list.

    you write so perfectly. it must come natual. if not you write beautifully!

    5/5 david

  • 16 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow.. this poem is AMAZING.. its written with such feeling and emotion.. its excellent.. the flow was good for the most part.. sometimes it was hard to catch the rhymes because some lines were too long.. but overall still a really great poem

    5/5