Under Her Wristband

by ¤|Æ’lοяεηζîά|¤   May 18, 2005


She’s the one so well liked,
The girl you envy,
Good grades, and a pretty face,
The girl you always wanted to be.

But under her wristband,
Are scars and scars,
Where her true stories lie,
The ones hidden in a jar.

This line tells how suicidal thoughts lingered,
All her sanity got chased out,
Her sleeves were soaked,
But the blood didn't take out the self-doubt.

Her mother hits and yells,
Whenever she did something wrong,
She’ll throw things at her,
And make her feel like she doesn't belong.

Her dad doesn't do anything,
He pays no attention to this poor girl,
I wonder if he even knows she exists,
In this unfair, cruel world.

She would lock herself in the closet,
Her favorite place on earth.
As tears fall and land on her blade,
She gets ready for her rebirth.

She drew a picture of a rose,
And filled it in with crimson red,
This little picture on her wrist,
Spoke for her, all the things unsaid.

Next time, she thought, maybe I’ll try harder,
So it’ll dig deeper, my friendly blade.
As red tears pour out,
My problems will fade….

© Copyright 2005 Florenzia

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  • 18 years ago

    by kels

    very good! also can sorta relate to some of it.very good.keep your head up and hopes high! check out some of mine if u want, i have more on the way

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashli

    this is by far your best one yet...the rhyming was much better, and the flow was smooth and didn't have all the bumps and stuff like that...absolutely beautiful! nice job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Me

    Your right i do like this poem!!!it is so good and oh so true... we all look at the one everyone admires and thinks she has no secrets but hidden sumwhere in her lies is a secret deeper then the ocean it's self. hey sounds like that start of a poem... well i gtg work on that thanks for the comment... u should read a raging fire... it is sad but it has its good parts. thanks a lot
    Katie

  • 18 years ago

    by Hayley

    wow..this is really good, it describes me in alot of ways..
    She would lock herself in the closet,
    Her favorite place on earth.
    As tears fall and land on her blade,
    She gets ready for her rebirth.
    well thats me..i hide in my closet... alot...lol..i know i know...anyways great poem!hugs-hayley

  • 18 years ago

    by Leah

    omg i love that poem, you were right!! lol thanks for commenting me.... if u wanna talk sumtime u can IM me if yu have AIM its xalonexforgotenx

    thankkss ur a doll

    love ya leah

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