Pretty Picture

by JodieVengeance   May 19, 2005


I paint a picture,
A pretty picture,
My paintbrush is my Knife,
the paint is my blood,
my body the canvas
The inspiration is you.

I paint my picture,
A bloody picture,
The canvas is getting full with art,
your name imprinted forever,
like the pain in my heart.

If you hate this pretty picture,
It's your fault,
you were my Inspiration,
My paintbrush went where you took me,
The canvas only went through the pain you gave me,
The artwork was the only thing that saved me,
From the torture that is my life.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Renee

    ooh nice. I dont usually read and like cutting poems. but this one has the imagery to draw me in. I've always loved poems about art, and comparing it to life. great job. keep up the good. work.

    Take Care,
    Renee

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    WELCOME TO THE CLUB!!! I love what you wrote in the application...But you'll come to see this club is not that serious. When you want someone to be serious and give you comments, adivce, help...anything...I will and some of the others will...but we're all about fun and jokes... :)

    I don't get into self harm but I must say this is very creative. Your emotions and pain come running through to the reader. It flowed nicely and clearly stated how you feel.

    Excellent write!! Again welcome to crazy land!! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel

    This is deep. Very good! Keep it up! Check out some of mine if you have time <3 Rachel

  • 18 years ago

    by Wolfwood

    wow. Theres much emotion in this, and you know what your talking about 5/5. Rate some of mine somethime

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