Watch her crumble

by JodieVengeance   Jul 18, 2005


She's sitting there asking herself why
She is holding a razor and wants to die
She watches the blood healthy and red
knowing in her mind she is better off dead
watch her crumble
see her fall
Watch her stumble
Hear her call
look inside
why cant you see
that girl
She's me

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~:.GodeSsOfTemPtati0n.:~

    good poem :) short but good... hope u pass by mine sometimes.... votes and comments much appreciated... ciao

  • 18 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Hey, i really liked this...and i know wut you mean, i hope ur alrite, *hugz* take care and keep on writing, this was awesome...very well written
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

  • 18 years ago

    by Carissa Rae

    this is a great poem. i dont know what else to say its just that good. u know. hold on stay strong!! keep writing!!!

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