I\'m Sorry

by Hillary   May 19, 2005


>To My Father<
I'm sorry I can never be
Never be what you expect of me
Theres no words in this world
That could ever express me

I'm sorry we can't have a conversation
With our fussing of Fighting

I'm sorry that i cant explain to you
So i resolve this in writing

I'm sorry I'm not as fast as my brother
I'm sorry I'm not as smart as my sister
I'm sorry I'm not as beautiful as my mother

I'm sorry you had no help raising me
I'm sorry because life with no mother
Well its phasing me

I'm sorry my tempure gets high in a short amount of time
I'm sorry I'm not the most patient person on this earth

But most of all I'm sorry my mother gave me birth

*please rate and comment.. this poem wasn't the longest poem in the world... but i felt i had to express how i felt in someway*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Hillary

    ^ no one asked, it wasnt the fact of the grammar it was how i felt, if u can handle that then dont read it anymore im not saying im the best but common who cares about some grammar?

  • 18 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Whoa really poor grammar, but very heartfelt. Id edit the grammatical errors in your poem to make it more effective, hope you can work with my feedback

  • 18 years ago

    by Corrie

    great job! Keep your head up.. 5/5
    *KISSES*~Corrie

  • 18 years ago

    by Alissa

    Hillary your the most beautiful and smartest girl I know and I love you just the way you are!! Dont be sorry because honestly your dad is the lucky one!

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