I\'m done

by iwanttobalone   May 20, 2005


This is it. I'm done
i can't handle it. i haven't won
I've tried and have failed
to fix it, to avail
i cannot fix what can't be fixed
my emotions are all mixed
i won't try anymore here
I'm unwanted- this much is clear
to everyone, to you all
this is the final time i fall
northing's ever gonna be right
I'm tired of this fruitless fight
if it's not one thing, it's another
I'm in the open, I've lost my cover
i don't want to need the knife
I'm tired of this screwed up life

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  • 18 years ago

    by elizabeth

    So my two favorite lines:
    this is the final time i fall
    and
    i don't want to need the knife

    Awesome! I really like that first one b/c it's so meaningful, it's like the definition of defeat, but Laura, you're not defeated; it's not the end so don't give up
    I like the other b/c it's such a good thing, I'm being hypocritical right now but people shouldn't have to rely on 'things' to get them through, and I'm glad you want to stop
    Ok well keep your head, and I'm here if you want to talk

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