Let your story be told

by bleedingmywords   May 21, 2005


Laying on the floor

curled in a ball

the bottle it empty

cause your nothing at all

cold blue and life less

is all that they can see

they drags you by your ankles

and you fall to your knees

look up at nothing

cause theres nothing at all

just the lonely window

and the broken down walls

shattered glass is useless

unless its eating at your flesh

the sharper the edges

the less of a mess

so keep it dull

completely cold

deeper and deeper

let your story be told.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robin

    how do you write such powerful poetry???? It's amazing! you're going on my favorites... yeah.. yet again.. 5/5 from me.. I'd give you a 6, but obviously I can't
    -Robin