Hello Mommy

by *Edwin*   May 21, 2005


Hello Mommy,
I miss you so bad,
It’s been a whole year,
Since you left me and dad.

I don’t know why,
Daddy says its okay,
I am only seven,
But I will understand one day.

Daddy’s always sad,
But I don’t know why,
Because you’re right here,
But there are still tears in his eye.

I’ve learned a lot this year,
I learned to sing and dance,
I know you would see me,
If you only had a chance.

It’s kind of weird,
How I’m sitting talking to you,
And why daddy’s sitting on the bench,
I have no clue.

I wish you could come home,
And see my nice clean room,
And see the garden outside,
And the flowers that bloom.

I think its time to go,
But I don’t want to leave,
I hope I will see you soon,
Because in miracles I believe.

Daddy’s walking over,
With the prettiest rose,
And hands it to me,
But I don’t know were it goes.

Why you’re not coming with us,
Theirs no one to blame,
So I’ll place this red rose,
On the stone with your name.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Omg that's so sad..I wanna Cry. *Tear sniff sniff*
    Really That was excellent. 5/5

    Keep Writing,
    -Ally

  • 18 years ago

    by .

    oh...my...god.....thats so sad! but AMAZINNG poem! keep it up you have a gift! 5/5 LOVED IT!

  • 18 years ago

    by JL

    omg! this was so sad! awesome job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Tina

    oh my god.. that was beyond amazing. you're awesome at writing.. it was very touching. keep up the awesome work!!!!!