That's so sad! You can feel your hurt! With time the hurt will start to fade. I have been there myself. Makes other relationships hard after you have had your heart broken! I hope things will look up for you! Take Care of yourself~ You don't need to read any of my poems I haven't posted any new ones. I really enjoy reading your poems! Brooke~ 5/5

This is a quite good poem..

The story is very sad, and you manage to feel the poem with emotions..

Yet, you could have tried to not write it as straight forward as you did...but that is just me..

The poem is very good..

Keep it up

WOW, that was very emotional and strongly written, I really felt your pain in this one....I can really relate to it alot!!! Hope that you are ok???
Stay strong....

*Sabrina*

5/5! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

wow this is real sad ...im crying dunno if its cause of the poem or cause i have hayfever but im crying :D

Another great poem! Theres not much to critique! It was really good!

i know how that feels... :( well, anyways great poem. but, the only thing is, that word does have a meaning and its very heart-breaking

Beautiful...It's so amazing! I mean here you are in love with this girl...Your caught up in her, this love that the two of you share and She tells you she doesn't really love you....I had a boyfriend that I was madly in love with. In fact he was my first offical boyfriend...We were together off and on for about 4 years... I loved him so...Though it seemed that he was just interested in what I could do for him, to him. It was all about the things I could do ot pleasure him. Or how far I'd let him take what he wanted from me. I loved him so much... I convinced that I would lose my virginity to him...I wanted to marry him... Though I asked him if he loved me and He couldn't reply... I tolde him those three magic words "I love you" and he couldn't say them back... It was crushing not to him him in return say what I've been longing to hear... That was the first guy I ever cried over. For a whole weekend I did nothing but wallow in self pity and cry... This girl really did a toll on your. It's clear for all to see. It's truely amazing how you project it onto this blank canvas and make a masterpiece... Beauty is the name of your game... And beautiful this poem is... Dark, gothic, yet beautiful.....

nIKKI BACK OFF! sORRY BUT I think I saw him first!!!!Go find someone else!

I love this poem, dear. It's amazing. It's so dark, but sweet in a way. I've never felt that way before. Your poems are amazing. I'm giving this one a 5/5. I want to read more. Keep writing and stay strong. I'm going to add you to my favorites.

-Ice

Big fan of this poem. Im looking forward to reading more of your work!
Infact im away to do so right now!

WOW. what a great poem...and it didn't even ryme.. good job. and thanks for the comments you made on my poems. appreciate it.

this is definetly one of your better poems. I hope that you are alright
~*Freak*~

Heartrending…it’s beautiful, nonetheless. Well done.

xxx

Excellent.

I absolutely loved this one...so touching...it was almost as though I could feel your pain....very well written...nice job...5/5 for sure and you have made it onto my list of favorites...hehe...lucky you....lol...anyways great job...luv yas mwah

-kayla-

Wow Darien that was amasing even though it didnt rhyme it was one of the best poems i've ever read good work keep it up ^.^ check out mine sometime <3<3

That is so lovley!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is very deep and sad.I love it.Sometimes i cut myself over my boyfriend because he makes me mad.well my ex but still i no it's wrong and i shoudnt do it.But great poem 5/5 keep up the good work.

Tears came running down my cheeks.
She tried to wipe them away from me.
I turned away and never looked back.
Her apologies would never save me.
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I really liked that stanza! You worded it really well. It was awesome, Sad, But good! Theres nothing else I can really say..Cause I can never find anything wrong with your poems =[ Spose thats a good thing though, Right? Tehe 5/5

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