Alone

by Lyla   May 26, 2005


Do you know what its like to feel alone?
To feel there in no one there for you
Nobody to catch you when you fall
Being surrounded by people
Yet feeling isolated in this
Cold lonely world
Nobody seems to notice
Nobody seems to care
This cruel world will never let you go
So you must remain
The pain like a thousand stabbing knives
Wounds cut deep into your flesh
Leaving heavy scars
Scars you can't hide
Scars as deep as that hole in your heart
Yet you live
Day by day
Walking in the shadows
Unnoticed
Alone

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  • 18 years ago

    by wdnest

    What an excellent poem....keep going...

  • 18 years ago

    by Wintersolstice

    An issue I takle often in my poems and in life. Suppose eveyone feels that way sometimes. It seems to end with an answer to the question it started with...lots of feeling in it. Good poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Piper

    i know what it feels like to be alone nice poem 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by ~DyingBlackRose~

    i used to be like this and now ive changed but i know that it really hurts to be alone and i hated every minute that i was alone and depressed.
    I hope everything is works out.
    ~blackroseblood~

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    its good maybe put it in2 stanzas and work on the length of lines..
    x)

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