Relality

by IWroteYouAPoemOnMyWrist   May 26, 2005


I'm nothing she replied
and fell to the floor
silently screaming inside
she couldn't take it anymore

tears fell from her eyes
her wrist were numb
she cant figure
who shes become

no ones there to stop her
shes all alone
lying on the ground
no ones home

she glanced at the clock
it was 9:05
she took her last breath
be for shed died

the knife all bloody
dropped out of her hand
she lats there frozen
her death shed demand

in her hand
was her suicide note
naked on the floor
i love you was the last words she spoke.

-sorry not so good....-

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  • 18 years ago

    by James

    hey girl.....that was wonderful but yet sad poem....excellent job of writing it.....which all ur poems are very very very good :) lov ya :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Robin

    What do you mean no good ?? I liked it a lot : ) 5/5 from me... great work.. liked every word of it.. the rhyme scheme and the flow of it : ) keep up the good work, I will be reading!!
    Check out my stuff if you get a chance..
    xox
    Robin

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