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by sarah jenkins   May 27, 2005


Inspirations lost within,
Happy moments forgotten.
My head begins to spin,
As everything Ive worked for turns rotten.

One great relationship lost,
A friendship reunited.
All rules are being tossed,
I guess everything cant be perfected.

Someone Laid down the law,
by which i had to follow.
Everyone has at least one flaw,
Even my heart isn't hollow.

Catastrophe has struck,
Intimacy was lost.
Maybe my life has been luck,
For now i have paid the cost.

Lovers have become haters,
Friends now enemies.
Things will be different later,
But for now we all must plea.

Someone will come save us,
This i know for sure.
In me, you must trust,
For even things undiscovered have a cure.

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