The dream

by cowgirlstar26   May 29, 2005


Sometimes when I dream
I can feel you next to me
I feel so safe within your arms
In my mind I'm safe from all harm
As I lay next to you safe and secure
you say you love me
but i'm not quit sure
I can feel your heart beating against my back
You see right through me like I'm a piece of glass.
I feel your breath upon my skin
All night now in your arms I have been
As the sun pierces the twilight sky
I will soon awake and begin to cry
Please don't leave me I softly say
Then you leave me with a kiss and fade away.......

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  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, awsome poem. I loved it. keep up the good work.

    ~ItalianStallion A.K.A. Joe~

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    Hey in the club i answered your post about a request for an honest opinion. the poem is great just i have suggested a few changes to make it even better! hope you happy.

    ~Jacklyn

  • 18 years ago

    by LoVeAbLeShOrTie

    5/5 touvhing..i luved it..keep up the great work..
    luv ya,
    LoVeAbLeShOrTie

  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    Awwl..very cute... once had a dream like that about my boyfriend.. then a few days later we broke up uh.. anyways lol .. that was great! loved it 5/5!

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