Comments : Hoping For The Best For Who Is Me

  • 14 years ago

    by *~*DarkFallenSuicide*~*

    thats really good...i cut myself but i am trying to get over myself and stop doing that for a friend i met and shes like an older sister to me.. thats really good 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by *tegan

    this is really sad..and really well written..i hope your doing alright now..just keep your head up..take care! love tegan
    xoxoxoxo

  • 14 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Wow what an emotional poem, it really touched my heart!!! I'm glad that you are feeling better today....I relate so much, I tried to commit suicide a few months ago and it's so hard to live each day, when you were suppose to dead....Great job, I love this poem!!!

    *Love Sabrina*

  • 14 years ago

    by Chasity

    very well written i think you r such an amazing girl i pray everything works out for you keep writing ur very good take care chas!

  • 14 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    that was amazing...all your poems are. Please take a look at mine...thank you. xxx

  • 14 years ago

    by EoB

    Excellent flow...

    nice rhyming scheme

    few forced rhymes...

    sad story

    good choice of words...

    long, yet interesting

    alltogether, excellent poem...Hope you won't try that again...

  • 14 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Hey, this is really good...im glad that you've improved a lot...very good poem..keep it up and take care..
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

  • 14 years ago

    by Corrie

    very well written! stay strong! 5/5 *KISSES~Corrie

  • 14 years ago

    by sHaTtErEdMiStAkE

    omg! this poem is so awesome. I loved it sooo much. You are such a good writer... Keep up the good work. 5/5 Good Job!

    ttyl,
    Maddy

  • 14 years ago

    by envy

    i really love this poem it means a lot to me

  • 14 years ago

    by Becky drake

    Tina,
    hey sweetie, when I first found this site, and submitted my poem, I just kinda randomly looked through and your poem about your best friend was the very first one I read. It was also the very first time I heard about cutting, I'm a 44 year old mother of two grown children, and I guess a little behind the times. But I read some more, then I came back and commented on yours after a long long prayer to God about those that need to feel pain to rid themselves of pain, and I know the words I wrote to you were from God, directly....i put you in my favorites, and prayed for you so many times... i was always scared to come back and read more of your work, because I was so afraid for you.... and I thought if you didn't write that something had happened to you. Long story short I read this poem and actually really cried tears of relief, tears of joy for your success in stopping the cutting. I KNOW YOU CAN DO THIS, I KNOW THINGS WILL NOT ALWAYS BE PERFECT, BUT YOU WILL WIN THE BATTLE, and you will spread the word to stop, not cut......I will continue to pray for you, I read the one you wrote just a day or so after this one, and I know you slipped back a little, but please believe me when I tell you, you are so special, and I know that God has a purpose for your life, he has a need for you to continue telling your story of how you beat the devil, and won victory over the pain......you will win You will always be an inspiration to me, and to many others. Please forgive me if I seem a little strong, when I say PLEASE TELL THE STORY OF, the greatest story ever told, yours and your frinds, many lives will be changed by you......I love you and I believe in you.....always in my heart and prayres Love ya Becky

  • 14 years ago

    by Shantell

    I glad to hear that you are alright. I hope some people I know can have a success story to tell. Please feel free to read my poem ALL OF ME

  • 14 years ago

    by Nici

    This poem was obviously a difficult subject to write about and I applaude your efforts in making it work so well. I to have attempted suicide before and like yourself came through the otherside.

    Keep writing
    Nici

  • 14 years ago

    by SEXYEYES

    WOW well written but it is sad i had tears down my face wen i was readin it i feel like that sum times n also feel like hangin my self please keep ur head up 5/5 take care melanie xx

  • 14 years ago

    by nickie

    Wow this poem was very well written. i loved it. i'm sorry it's true. i hope you're okay and i'm glad you're recovering. it's an awful thing. one of my friends cuts and she's done heroine and ecstacy and it totally screwed up her life. she took 2 bottles of tylenol and was in the hospital for 2 weeks. she's recovered now and on occasion cuts but she doesn't want to die anymore. she says it's not worth it. i have no idea what i'd do without her cause i tell her a lot of things that go wrong in my life. well anyways i hope everything turns out okay for you in the end. this was wonderfully writen. 5/5 good job. keep up the good work and stay strong babe.

    love always
    nickie powers

  • 14 years ago

    by Becky drake

    Tina,

    i am Becky Drake's neice lindsey, and she has been showing me you heart tuching storys of your life i am only 13 years of age and even now when i first saw your poetry there was tears coming to my 2 little eyes. Even at my age i some times weep of some of the pain i sometimes go through my self well i hope you the very best and with all of my heart i will tell you this you will all ways be in my prayers and well as i am writing this i am having trears comings to my 2 little eyes i hope you the best in the future.

    you will always be in my heart and my prayers forever and ever

    love always,

    Becky Drake's Neice Lindsey !!!!!!!!!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by brooke christina

    well done for getting out of it. keep the courage up. because you are here for a reason. let that not be waisted

  • 14 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    wow you are a very good writer a great one indeed im sorry for your past it kinda realates to mine so i understand of how you feel the poem was amazing you have talent
    take care
    HS

  • 14 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    wow you are a very good writer a great one indeed im sorry for your past it kinda realates to mine so i understand of how you feel the poem was amazing you have talent
    take care
    HS

  • 14 years ago

    by Denise

    I wouldn't do drugs, but I've wanted to die but to scared to do anything about it. I really like your poem I can relate to it, if you need to talk e-mail me at babyflirt2315@yahoo.com.