Wow what an emotional poem, it really touched my heart!!! I'm glad that you are feeling better today....I relate so much, I tried to commit suicide a few months ago and it's so hard to live each day, when you were suppose to dead....Great job, I love this poem!!!
hey sweetie, when I first found this site, and submitted my poem, I just kinda randomly looked through and your poem about your best friend was the very first one I read. It was also the very first time I heard about cutting, I'm a 44 year old mother of two grown children, and I guess a little behind the times. But I read some more, then I came back and commented on yours after a long long prayer to God about those that need to feel pain to rid themselves of pain, and I know the words I wrote to you were from God, directly....i put you in my favorites, and prayed for you so many times... i was always scared to come back and read more of your work, because I was so afraid for you.... and I thought if you didn't write that something had happened to you. Long story short I read this poem and actually really cried tears of relief, tears of joy for your success in stopping the cutting. I KNOW YOU CAN DO THIS, I KNOW THINGS WILL NOT ALWAYS BE PERFECT, BUT YOU WILL WIN THE BATTLE, and you will spread the word to stop, not cut......I will continue to pray for you, I read the one you wrote just a day or so after this one, and I know you slipped back a little, but please believe me when I tell you, you are so special, and I know that God has a purpose for your life, he has a need for you to continue telling your story of how you beat the devil, and won victory over the pain......you will win You will always be an inspiration to me, and to many others. Please forgive me if I seem a little strong, when I say PLEASE TELL THE STORY OF, the greatest story ever told, yours and your frinds, many lives will be changed by you......I love you and I believe in you.....always in my heart and prayres Love ya Becky
Wow this poem was very well written. i loved it. i'm sorry it's true. i hope you're okay and i'm glad you're recovering. it's an awful thing. one of my friends cuts and she's done heroine and ecstacy and it totally screwed up her life. she took 2 bottles of tylenol and was in the hospital for 2 weeks. she's recovered now and on occasion cuts but she doesn't want to die anymore. she says it's not worth it. i have no idea what i'd do without her cause i tell her a lot of things that go wrong in my life. well anyways i hope everything turns out okay for you in the end. this was wonderfully writen. 5/5 good job. keep up the good work and stay strong babe.
i am Becky Drake's neice lindsey, and she has been showing me you heart tuching storys of your life i am only 13 years of age and even now when i first saw your poetry there was tears coming to my 2 little eyes. Even at my age i some times weep of some of the pain i sometimes go through my self well i hope you the very best and with all of my heart i will tell you this you will all ways be in my prayers and well as i am writing this i am having trears comings to my 2 little eyes i hope you the best in the future.
you will always be in my heart and my prayers forever and ever