Torn inside out

by IWroteYouAPoemOnMyWrist   May 30, 2005


Nothing but broken
empty inside
torn inside out
she took all his lies

glancing at the scars
from her suicidal harm
marks all over her body
all over her arms

looking at her father
who she had to hate
from that one night
that was a big mistake

shed done nothing wrong
but he wouldn't quit
he hit her like crazy
she couldn't take it

shes said daddy please stop
her said don't tell me what to do
he made a fist she couldn't believe
what she was going threw

since that incident
she used her blade
marking lines
that will not fade

thoughts rushed threw her mind
they wouldn't going away
she couldn't live any longer
she wasn't any where near okay

she took the gun
and pulled the trigger
shot her head
things wouldn't get better

so now everyone will no
at the end of this letter
why this had happened
why she lived such a different figure

~the last line means she lived life different from others~

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  • 18 years ago

    by James

    aww sabrina thanks once again for ur lovely comment means a lot to me.......the girl that I'm writin about she is married but she is an ex which someone should have killed me when i broke up with her that was 13yrs ago and I so very much still love her more then i'll ever love anyone else....but gettin her to realize that is not looking good :( any way thank you once again lov you take care and keep in touch plzz :)

  • 18 years ago

    by James

    awww sabrina that was so sad but yet very good ur one of the best poets there is.....ur poems are so very good unlike mine :( anyways ur an awesome writter I always lov readin ur poems....and thank you for commenting on mine even know there not that good this poem is way to good to be 4.8 5/5 from me :) take care cutie :)

  • 18 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    aww sabrina, that's so sad =*(....but it's so amazing too....i love your poems so much....we haven't talked for a really long time, i hope you're doing ok.....i love you lots ~much love~ ~many hugs~

    -brittnay- ((5/5))

    p.s. email me if you need to talk

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