Looking Around

by Chad   Jun 1, 2005


Looking around...
Looking around I see nothing for me.
Looking around...
Looking around I see nothing I can be.
Looking around...
Looking around I see nothing I can do.
Looking around...
Looking around I see nothing I can argue.
Looking around...
Looking around I see everything to come.
Looking around...
Looking around I see everything as a victim.
Looking around...
Looking around...
Looking around...

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  • 18 years ago

    by jencam

    i'll be honest....i wasn't sure if i would like this one. I'm usually not a fan of repeating in poetry, I was quite surprised. I enjoyed this poem, very very unique. nice job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    very good poem. keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by Rolo

    Different, but I liked it. 5/5.