Deeper

by Lauren Waszkiewicz   Jun 1, 2005


||cut so deep it wont bleed||
||so deep it wont hurt||
||so deep it stops all pain||
||not deep enough to live||
||i cant stop||
||it wont end||
||i scream||
||but no one heres||
||i cry||
||but no one cares||
||i die||
||and no one notices||

i really love this poem.. i dont know why...i know it doesnt rhyme but it means alot to me.. i wrote it first in my online diary than changed it around a bit. PLZ vote and comment. thanks!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~* gifted little fallen~*

    it was a great poem... :P no need to worry .... u can do great hings in life

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    hello....14 visits and no votes?!?!?!??!no comments!?!??!?!!?please i need feedback!!!!