Still in lust

by Absinth Eyes   Jun 2, 2005


I remember how we met
So very long ago...
For every secret kept
And for everything I know

I have to admit I fell hard
As you whispered words so sweet
It turned into something so cold
That killed the best of me

It took my heart and lost my soul
I didn't think it'd ever end
But somehow we lost control
And now we're only friends...

I stared as you took my all
And never gave it back
I love you, don't you care at all?
How could we dare lose track?

There is no line between love and death
But my cries are sharp and shrill
I worship you, my cold black dove
I'm in love and lust still

~~~Edited it a bit... I like it better this way.~~

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  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    gud poem.. i admire ur choice of words.. i lyk ur title.. the only thing i gotta comment on is the last 2 words.. "lust still" it kinda has a hard pronounciation.. but i dont think thats a big problem..
    uve done gr8.. keep it up
    nouna
    thnx bunches 4 ur comment.. meant a lot

  • 18 years ago

    by LeXi

    Wow. u have a great talent for writing. i love it! keep up the great work!